Feedback from 46

you have 7 posts. i think this is enough at the moment. Your story board is not on your blog yet. We think your ideas are very good because you will be mixing animation with real life this will really show off your creative skills. The story line is clear to understand by the way it is organised and presented. Its clear that the genre is childrens film but what kind of children's film is it adventure? mystery? e.t.c it is not very clear how you are going to actually produce this we think more detail. The way in which you have shown each process you have gone through, such as deciding which door to choose is very good because it shows everybody your ideas and that you have really thought about producing and planning it. you need to add in shot lists and story board.